Calandria
Walcott
January
9 2013
MCOM
226-003
Leads
1. Lead: Man dies instantly in a tragic accident
involving a fire truck on its way to a reported fire!
Nut Graph: This morning at 7:10 am at the intersection of Post Road and Rollins
Avenue, there was a tragic car accident that in involved two vehicles, a van
driven by Charles R. Lydon and a fire truck with two firemen aboard. Authorities
reported that Mr. Lydon was traveling at a speed of forty miles per hour and
that the fire truck was traveling at a speed of 25 miles per hour responding to
an emergency report of a store fire that ended up being a false alarm.
According to authorities, unfortunately while Mr. Lydon was driving north on to
Post Road his van struck the siren blazing fire engine and he was killed
instantly while both firemen were also hospitalized. While there is still no
determination for who is ay fault, Mr.
Lyndon’s van suffered major damage and the fire truck was also left in ruins
with 50,000 dollars worth of damages.
2. Lead: According to the Insurance Institute for
Highway Safety the Bigger cars mean better safety!
Nut Graph: Today in Washington, D.C. the Insurance Institute for Highway Safety
states that there are more advantages of driving a larger car rather than driving
a smaller two door car despite the gas difference. Driving a larger car assures
that the driver and the passengers will be more protected in dangerous
situations such as a possible car wreck. Studies show that there are fewer injuries
that happen in a wreck with bigger cars than there are with smaller cars. The
bigger the car the better the safety!
3. Lead: children can possibly face major danger for
eating Americas all time favorite barbecue food, the hot dog!
Nut Graph: The Journal of the American Medical Association featured and
article that shows that children are at risk when eating hot dogs and every
five days someone in the U.S. chokes to death from eating one. Hot dogs are so
dangerous that they every five days, it is estimated that someone in the United
States chokes on a hotdog. Children under the age of four should never be given
a whole hot dog to eat because of the possible risks. It is now clear that
hot dogs really aren’t so “hot.”
4. Lead: Examiners realized a month-old unclaimed corpse
was buried at 51 year old Kristine Belcuors, funeral instead of her own body
which left her family stricken with grief.
Nut Graph: 51 year old Kristine Belcuors died of heart attack last
week. Her funeral costed 7,000 dollars with more than 100 friends and family in
attendance. But sadly during the funeral her family noticed that laid in her
coffin was a one month old unknown corpse inside of her coffin. Her family was devastated
by the news knowing how much effort was put into her funeral ceremony. According
to the medical examiners, there was an error in reading the tags of the corpses
which led to the confusion of the two bodies. I guess people have to keep
better track of their dead bodies.
Look s like you're starting to get the idea.
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